After receiving feedback about our opening, we made a few changes:
Firstly, we added heavy breathing over the beginning and ending of the film to ensure there were no awkward silences.
Secondly, we overlapped the sound from one shot to the next shot to make the change in frame less abrupt and make it more authentic.
Thirdly we changed the font from red and white to just plain white, which we felt worked in favour of our film opening.
We altered the sequence of the shots slightly in order for the audience to understand that he has just left home and is now returning to fulfil his motive. We added the only dialogue to the film opening "Did you forget something?" in order for the audience to realise that he has only just left home, and is returning very shortly after leaving, which is why he turns around when he reaches the crossroads as he has 'made up his mind.
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